帮忙修改一下我错误的英文文法~
我要交功课的英文story~帮忙伤改成正确的文法~
WhenIwasopenmyeyes,Iknowthatwhowasstandingbeforeme.Becausemybrainshowsthattheyarenamesandourrelationship.Theycalledfathermotherandbrother,John.
Adayslater,theyareverycordialtome,itlooklikearerealfamily,butIknowthatIneverthesamewiththem,sinceIamrobot.AlthoughIappearanceislooklikethehuman,butIamnohadheart,didn’tknowwhatfeelingofhuman,soIamespeciallyexistinthisfamily.
Irememberthat,Ionceaskedaverystupidproblem,‘Whydidyoumakemeintotheworld?’Ilookedatmother’seyestoasked.
Shelookedatmyeyestoo.‘Don’tmindthatyouarerobot,yourhereistrue,wearerealfamily.’Herhandwasputonmyleftchestandsaid.Duringdayslater,IhavebeenfeelingthatIbegintochange.
Theyarelovetomakemeknow,Iamnotespeciallyexist,Iamtheirfamily.
Butgoodtimesdidn’tlastlong,gentlemotherappearedthewhitehair,astrongfatherisbeginweak,andevenaccompaniedmyelderbrotherwillhavetomarrytoo,butonlymedidn’thaveanychanges.
Afterwards,mypremonitionoccurred,myparentspassedawayoneafteranother.Ilearnedtoshedtears.
Afterthat,Ileftthefamily,becauseIdidn’twanttosadagain.Ihavefoundforthefamilyoftherobot,andIlivedinhere.
NowIhaverobotfamily,sometimesIwillgotovisitsJohnandhisson.Myliveswasveryhappily.
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