英文作文求检查
MyfamilyalwayscelebratesontheSpringFestival,becauseonthisdayallmembersofthefamilywillhavethetime.
Thecelebrationwasalitterbored,becausewehavedifferentpreferencesandage,soitwasmoredifficulttocommunicatewithyourelder.Mygrandparentshadboughtsomecandyanddriedfruitsandhadputitontheplatebeforewecame.Whenyouarrived,youcouldwatchTVoreatingsnacks.
At8:00pm,begantelevisionprogram.Atthismoment,wehadbeenwatchingTVuntilnextdayearlyinthemorning.Duringthistime,youcouldn’tsleep,thisisChina’stradition.Whenwastwelveo’clock,everyonegavenewyear’sgreetingstohiselder.MycousinsandIshotofffirecrackersafterwards.Thenwehadbeeneatingdumplings.
有一些连接的词语不知道用的得不得当,还有一些动词的时态什么的,求整体看看怎么样,还有没有可以改善的地方!