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英文作文求检查MyfamilyalwayscelebratesontheSpringFestival,becauseonthisdayallmembersofthefamilywillhavethetime.Thecelebrationwasalitterbored,becausewehavedifferentpreferencesandage,soitwasmoredifficulttocommu
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MyfamilyalwayscelebratesontheSpringFestival,becauseonthisdayallmembersofthefamilywillhavethetime.

Thecelebrationwasalitterbored,becausewehavedifferentpreferencesandage,soitwasmoredifficulttocommunicatewithyourelder.Mygrandparentshadboughtsomecandyanddriedfruitsandhadputitontheplatebeforewecame.Whenyouarrived,youcouldwatchTVoreatingsnacks.

At8:00pm,begantelevisionprogram.Atthismoment,wehadbeenwatchingTVuntilnextdayearlyinthemorning.Duringthistime,youcouldn’tsleep,thisisChina’stradition.Whenwastwelveo’clock,everyonegavenewyear’sgreetingstohiselder.MycousinsandIshotofffirecrackersafterwards.Thenwehadbeeneatingdumplings.

有一些连接的词语不知道用的得不得当,还有一些动词的时态什么的,求整体看看怎么样,还有没有可以改善的地方!

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  以下是我对您的作文的修改,仅供参考:   MyfamilyalwaysholdscelebrationsontheSpringFestival,foronthisday   allmembersofthefamilyarefree.   However,thecelebrationsarealitterbored.Sincetheoldandtheyoung   havedifferentpreferences,soitisdifficulttocommunicatewithoneanother.   Mygrandparentsusuallybuysomecandiesanddriedfruitsandputthemon   theplatesbeforewevisitthem.Whenwearriveattheirhome,wecanwatchTV   oreatsnacks.At8:00pm,theSpringFestivalGalaontheTVbegins.Then   wewatchtheTVprogramuntilearlynextdayinthemorning.Duringall   thistime,wecan’tfallasleep,althoughwesometimesfeelverysleepy.Thisis   theChinesetradition.Whentheclockstrikes12midnight,everyoneshould   sayNewYear’sgreetingstotheelderly.AfterwardsmycousinsandIset   offsomefirecrackers.Thenwealleatdumplings.
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