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加入你是玉林高中高一(1)班的学生李华,你的好朋友上了另一所高中,请给王平写一封信,具体内容如下:1介绍新学校的情况:校园美丽,很多树木;老师工作很努力,同学对人友善,2怀念过去:想念王平以及过去的美好时光;与他相处好,患难与共.3个人观点:友谊重要,希望互相保持联系.100词左右,参考词汇:seniormiddleschool保持联系:keepintouch
下面是作文:
DearWangPing,
Howareyoudoing?I'mnowstudyinginYulinseniormiddleschool.IwassosurprisedthanIcamehere.Icouldseebeautifulflowersandtalltreeseverywhere.
ThisisthemostbeautifulschoolIhavebeen.Andtheteachersarehard-working.IlovemyclassmatesbecausetheyaresofriendlythanItreatthemasmyfimilies,theyhelpmealot.
However,Istillrememberthedayswhichwestudyedandplayedtogether.Imissyouverymuch.Yougotwellwithmeandsharedhappinessandsorrowwithme.I'mthankstoyou.
Ithinkafriendshipisimportant.Westillarefriendsinfuture.Pleasekeepintouch.
满分为25分,请根据高考要求打一下分,如果有语法或是其他什么错的请指出,