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请帮我修改一下我写的一篇英语作文,帮我指出里面有什么错误,4级It’suniversallyacknowledgedthatispower.thetruthofitisself-evident,andtheproverbindicatesthatknowleage,tosomeextent,willtransformintoasor
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请帮我修改一下我写的一篇英语作文,帮我指出里面有什么错误,4级

It’suniversallyacknowledgedthatispower.thetruthofitisself-evident,andtheproverbindicatesthatknowleage,tosomeextent,willtransformintoasortofpowerwhichmakesitsowncontributiontosuccess.

Therearemanyexamplessupportingthisargument,andI’dliketotakeHelenKellerforexample,wholostthemostindispensibleabilitylikehearingandvisualsense,aftersufferingfeverwithoutanycure.however,shedidin’tlosegeartandhadabugaboutwriting,besides,shepaidrenmendousattentiontolearning.then,sheappliedherknowledgetothecareerofeducationandwriting.Finally,shebecamesosuccessthatfewpeopledon’trecognizeher.

Nodoubt,knowledgeareplayingavitalroleinourdullroutineofeverydaylifeandexertingtremendousinfluenceonourcareer,andabove-mentionedtellusthatthepowerofknowledgeisinfinite.

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  第六行:losegeart改为loseheart   第八行:sosuccess改为sosuccessful   第九行:are改为is   第十行:above-mentioned后少一个名词   Inall,youaresoexcellent.Iadmireyou.
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