MyfavouratecityisShanghai.Shanghaiisthesencondlargestcityinchina,therearealotofpeoplelivethere.ThisbigcityisneartheChangjiangriveranditisveryrichandbeautiful.Therearemanyinterestingplacestoplay.Peoplealsocangotodifferentparkstohaveagoodtime.
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