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【雅思作文评分剑5test4task2Researchindicatesthatthecharacteristicswearebornwithhavemuchmoreinfluenceonourpersonlaityanddevelopmentthananyexperienceswemayhaveinourlife.whichdouconsidertobemajorinfluence?Inthisda】
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Researchindicatesthatthecharacteristicswearebornwithhavemuchmoreinfluenceonourpersonlaityanddevelopmentthananyexperienceswemayhaveinourlife.

whichdouconsidertobemajorinfluence?

Inthisdayandage,researchfromscientistsshowsthatthecharacteristicswearebornwithhavemuchmoreimpactonourpersonalityanddevelopmentthanexperiencewehaveinourlife.Frommyperspective,Iconsistthatourcharacteristicsarelessimportantthananyexperienceswemayhaveinourlife.

Ontheonehand,ourparentsnurtureingusplaysaparamountrolefromwegrowingup.Whatweexperienceisthatweshouldfocuson.Forinstance,whenachildthoughtoneplusoneisthree,hisorherparentsmusthaveshownthecorrectansweristwo.Throughthisfailedexperience,thechildwillrememberthisequation.Futhermore,onejuvenilepersonmightbecultivatedacelebrity,thoughheorsheisnotagenius,ornotintelligentatall.Parentscanchangechildrenwhattheythink,orhowtheydo.Moreprecisely,manyordinaryadolescencescanhavegoodpersonalityanddevelopment,althoughttheyarenotgeniuses.Additonally,somedisableschildrenmightbecomefamouspeopleoweingtotheirperents’nurtureandencouragement.Ifcleverchildrendidnotbecultivatedbytheirparents,geniuseswouldbecomeordinarypeople.

Ontheotherhand,itismanifestthatchildrenhavetheflawlesscharacteristicsfromparentsisverycrucial.Admittedlly,geniusesyoutheseasilyachievetheirgoals,becomecelebrities.Moreover,whatisneeded,theeducationisthekey.Onlydointelligentchildrenstudyingooduniversities,theycanusethepetentiontheyhave.Naturalcharacteristicsareindispensableaswell.

Tosumup,characteristicsorexperiences,whichhavemoreinfluenceonourpersonalityanddavelopment,itisacontroversialargumentinthecontemporaryworld.Pesonally,Ibelievethatexperienceswemayhavemoreimpactonourpesonalityanddevelopment.

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