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IencounteredaterriblethingwhenIwas10yearsandIneverforgotit,becauseatthatmomentIwasbetweenlifeanddeath.
Iwasborninacoastalcity,thepeoplesofthiscityveryfondofswimmingintheseaandIalwaysgotothebeachafterdinner,thishadbecomemyhabit.Thatdayofmystorywasabadweatherdayandseawindwassoheavy,Iwasveryoverconfidenceofmyswimmingtechnique,sostillhadwenttothebeachandswumintheseaalone,Iwasveryexcitedsofartherandfartherawayfromtheshore,maybethatisnotveryfarforadult,butIdaresaythewaterdeeperthanmyheight,theweatherisgettingworse,Irealizedthedangersodecidedtoreturntoshore,butit'stoolate,abigwavecametowardsmesuddenlythenIchokedawaterandbeswallowedbywater,Itriedtostayawakeandexhaustedalleffortstoselfhelp,butabigwavefollowcameagain,thenIwascompletelysubmergedintothewater,Ifeelmyconsciousnessgraduallyblurredevencan'tfeelthepain,butabighandcaughtmeandpulledmetomove,IdonotknowanythingbutIrealizedthatIreturnedtothebeachlater,myfathersavedmeandIcriedthemoment,Idon'tknowwhyIwascryinginthattime,maybebecausefearorfelthappy,maybeIwasmoved.
LaterIknewthatmyfatheralwayscametothebeachwithme,butnevermademeawarethathim.Myfathergavememylifeandmyfathersavedmeinthefaceofdeath,IdonotwanttothankmyfatherherebecauseinfrontofparentseverydayisThanksgiving.
ThereisasayinginChina,just"theonewhodrownsistheonewhoisgoodatswimming",soafterthatincident,IalwaysverycarefulwhenIwasswimming,maybethisisbyfallingwelearntogosafely.