这是我儿子的一则日记,有语法和时态错误的指出来.还没打完
shewassilent,andshehadasmileonherface.theothergirlonherrightsaid:"wedidn'tlikethewindowsopen,didyouhaveidea?wemadeyouclosetowindows,youmustclosethem.youhadabigmouse.whywereyourwordssomuch?youcloseyourmouse.ididn'tthinkofyousay.".ithoughtofsheisabadstudent,iwassilent,ididn'tlikespeakingtoher.waitedamoment,iwantedtodrink.somewaterfelldownthegroundwhenidrink.thegirlsaid:"myfoothadsomewater."thenshethrewabottleto