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一篇英语作文,大家看一下有没有语法错误,还有就是有什么地方可以修改的,thankyousomuch!

Shanghai

Hello!WelcometoShanghai.Shanghaiisreallyabeautifulcity.It'sinthesoutheastinChina.AndtheweatherinShanghaiisawlaysfine,soyoucanvisitmanyplacesofinerest.

Asweallknow,ShanghaiOrentalPedrlTVTowerisaamazingplace.Thetowerisnotonlytall,butalsonice.

TheBundisoneofthesymbolsofShanghai.Andthebesttimetovisitthereisatnight.I'msurethatyouwilllovethere.

PeopleinShanghaiarefrienglyandhelpful,theyawlayssmileatyou.

Inaword,Shanghaiisamagiccity,andIloveShanghai.

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  打字手误:placesofinterest,ShanghaiOrientalPearlTVTower,anamazingplace   我觉得有更好的写法:It'sinthesoutheastinChina.---ItliesinthesoutheasternChina.   theyawlayssmileatyou--常常微笑用bealwaysdoing的句型更能表现   I'msurethatyouwilllovethere.--避免和后面的love重复,用fallinlovewithit   另外,妙灵法仙写得也不错,只是有几个语法错误.我也稍作修改,嘿嘿.   Hello!WelcometoShanghai.Thisisreallyabeautifulcity,whichliesinthesoutheasternChina.Theweatherhereisfine,andyoucanvisitmanyplacesofinterest.   Asweallknow,ShanghaiOrentalPearlTVTowerisanamazingplace.Thetowerisnotonlytall,butalsonice.   TheBundisoneofthesymbolsofShanghai.Andthebesttimetovisitthereisatnight.I'msurethatyouwillfallinlovewithit.   PeopleinShanghaiarefriendlyandhelpful,theyareawlayssmilingatyou.   Inaword,Shanghaiisamagiccity,andIloveShanghai.
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