一篇简单的初一英语作文,进来看下有什么错误,
January30thismymother’sbirthyday.notlongago,shehadherforty-secondbirthdaywithmyfamily.
First,mysisterandmegavehersomegoodgifts——Igaveheraportraitofher,mysistergaveherabirthdaycard.Shelikedthemverymuch!
Theninnoon,myfamilyhadadeliciouslunchat“ChuanYufamily”restaurant,unclespentmoneyforlunch!Hesaidwithasmile:“happybirthdaytomysister!”
Last,inevening,myfathergaveherabunchofroses.Whatasurprisegift!Mymothersaid:“Ineverspentsuchahappyday.Thankyouverymuch!”