1991年考研作文（请帮助修改错误）
Direction:
A.Title:WHERETOLIVE---INTHECITYORTHECOUNTRY?
B.Timelimit:40minutes
C.Wordlimit:120-150words(notincludingthegivenopeningsentence)
D.YourcompositionshouldbebasedontheOUTLINEbelowandshouldstartwiththegivenopeningsentence.
E.YourcompositionmustbewrittenclearlyintheANSWERSHEET.
OUTLINE:
1.ConveniencesofthecityAttractionsofthecountry
2.DisadvantagesofbothMypreference
WheretoLive---intheCityortheCountry?
Withthedevelopmentofeconomy,thecity,whichisthecentreofeconomicgrowingandmoderncivilization,isbecomingmorevitalever.Therefore,peopleinamountingnumbersettleinthecity,foragreatmanychancestogethighly-paidjobs,foravarietyofmethodsoftravel,forschoolswithsufficientmaterialsforchildren,andsoon.
Butsomepeople,onthecontrary,preferlivinginthecountry,wheretheymayhavetospendhoursonjustgoingtowork.Itseemssuchanunconvenience,butthosepeoplemayasklikethis,"wherecouldyoufindanapartmentwithsuchsilentnightsinthecity?wherecouldyoufindaparkwithsuchfreshairinthecity?"
Indeed,thecityisbecomingacrowdasanincreasinglynumberofhabitantsoccupyingitslimitedcapacity,whilethecountry,whereevenbuyinggroceriesprobablycostawholemorning,isn'thabitable,atleastfornow.
Forme,livinginthecityismoresuitable,asthereisnoneedaffordingacarorwaitingabusforhalfanhourhere!
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