这是我考研时写的作文,帮我看看能拿多少分这是我考研时写的两篇文章,大概就是这样的,请问分别能拿多少分啊?我好急.我是在北京地区的,是艺术生.DearLucy:Iamsoexcitedtowritethislettertoreco|小学作文问答-字典翻译问答网

这是我考研时写的作文,帮我看看能拿多少分这是我考研时写的两篇文章,大概就是这样的,请问分别能拿多少分啊?我好急.我是在北京地区的,是艺术生.DearLucy:Iamsoexcitedtowritethislettertoreco

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这是我考研时写的作文,帮我看看能拿多少分

这是我考研时写的两篇文章,大概就是这样的,请问分别能拿多少分啊?我好急.我是在北京地区的,是艺术生.

DearLucy:

Iamsoexcitedtowritethislettertorecommendmyfavoritemoviestoyou,themoviesnameisMozart.

Iconsiderthatthismoviesissuitableforyou.Firstofall,Morzatisamusicalmast,themoviesintroduceshismusicalcomposition,dailylifeandhisfunnydeeds.Additionally,youlovemusicandpiano.soIthinkyouwilllikeitsomuch.

Bytheway,theweatherforecastsaiditwouldbecoldtomorrow,pleasekindlykeepwarm.Iwilllookforwardtoyourreply.

Yourssincerely,

Liming

小作文我大概记得这么多了,但是我记得当时写的时候是写够一百字的了,现在只想到这么多

Fromthesimplebutcompellingillustrationabovewecanseethattwopeopleareputtingmanythingsintotheseeandalotofthingsareinthesee.Thecartoondoesmirroraprevalentphenomenonincontemporarysociety.Thatismanypeoplearenotconsciousofprotectingmarineenvironment.

Actually,thisphenomenonhasattractedextensiveattentionofoursocietyandbecomeincresinglyunsatisfactory.Therefore,wecan’tignoresomeproblemsitbringsabout.Tobeginwith,ifwecan’tdealwiththisissueofmarineenvironment,itwillbeharmtooursocialdevelopmentandharmony.What’smore,itwouldbringaboutsomeotherproblems.Supposingweturnablindeyetothismatter,ourcommunitywillgofrombadtoworseandthenightmarewillcome.

Judgingfromwhathavebeenmentionedabout,itisimperativeforustocarryouteffectivemeasures.Firstofall,weshouldappealourauthoritiestoworkoutexplicitlawstocopewiththeissueofmarineenvironment.Additionally,apublizicingeducationalcampaignissupposedtoenforcetoenhancecitizen’sawarenessaboutprotectingmarineenvironment.However,practiceisthemostessentialelement.weoughttopayattentiontoitfromourselvesandasamodelforotherstofollow.

PS：希望你们说出我能得这么多分的理由.希望能根据考研的评分规则来给我打分

对了,莫扎特我打错了,考试时时写Mozart的.好像大师写错了,movies忘了写单数了,会扣多少分?还有sea,increasingly和publicizing我是打错的了,考试时写对的.

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　　Iamsoexcitedtowritethislettertorecommendmyfavorite(movies)toyou,the(movies)nameisMozart. 　　Iconsiderthatthismoviesissuitableforyou.Firstofall,（Morzat）isamusical(mast),the(movies)introduceshismusicalcomposition,dailylifeandhisfunnydeeds.Additionally,youlovemusicandpiano.soIthinkyouwilllikeitsomuch. 　　Bytheway,theweatherforecastsaiditwouldbecoldtomorrow,please(kindly)keepwarm.Iwilllookforwardtoyourreply. 　　Fromthesimplebutcompellingillustrationabovewecanseethattwopeopleareputtingmanythingsintothe(see)andalotofthingsareinthe(see).Thecartoondoesmirroraprevalentphenomenonincontemporarysociety.Thatismanypeoplearenotconsciousofprotectingmarineenvironment. 　　Actually,thisphenomenonhasattractedextensiveattentionofoursocietyandbecome（incresingly）unsatisfactory.Therefore,wecan’tignoresomeproblemsitbringsabout.Tobeginwith,ifwecan’tdealwiththisissueofmarineenvironment,itwillbe（harm）tooursocialdevelopmentandharmony.What’smore,it（would）bringaboutsomeotherproblems.（Supposing）weturnablindeyetothismatter,ourcommunitywillgofrombadtoworseandthenightmarewillcome. 　　Judgingfromwhathavebeenmentionedabout,itisimperativeforustocarryouteffectivemeasures.Firstofall,weshouldappealourauthoritiestoworkoutexplicitlawstocopewiththeissueofmarineenvironment.Additionally,a(publizicing）educationalcampaignissupposed(toenforce)toenhancecitizen’sawarenessaboutprotectingmarineenvironment.However,practiceisthemostessentialelement.weoughttopayattentiontoitfromourselvesandasamodelforotherstofollow. 　　具体的评分细则不清楚,基本正确,论据充分就能得10分以上,我觉得你两篇应该可以得20左右吧.拼写错误的好像一个不扣分,类似达到3个扣一分这样的.重复错的不重复扣分.