goodafternoon,mynameis***,itisagreathonorthatIcanhavetheopportunityforthisinterview,iwouldliketoanswerwhateveryouaskaboutthisjob,andihopethatmyworkexperiencecanbesuitableforthepositionthatyouareaskingfor. 　　Iam23yearsold,borninxiamenandthismonthigraduatedfromxiamenUniversityandhavereceivedmybachelordegree. 　　Inthepastfouryears,Ispentmostofmytimetostudy,soiacquiredbasicknowledgeforMarketingintheory.Besides,IhaveattendedlotsofPractice...(whatarethey),ThroughtheseworkingexperienceIhaveadeeplyunderstandingofmymajor.(whatareyourmajor) 　　Nowiwillintroducemyselfbriefly 　　Iam26yearsold,borninshandongprovince. 　　Iwasgraduatedfromqingdaouniversity.mymajoriselectronic.andigotmybachelordegreeaftermygraduationintheyearof2003. 　　Ispendmostofmytimeonstudy,ihavepassedCET4/6.andihaveacquiredbasicknowledgeofmymajorduringmyschooltime. 　　InJuly2003,IbeginworkforasmallprivatecompanyasatechnicalsupportengineerinQingDaocity.BecauseI'mcapableofmoreresponsibilities,soIdecidedtochangemyjob. 　　AndinAugust2004,IleftQingDaotoBeiJingandworkedforaforeignenterpriseasaautomationsoftwaretestengineer.BecauseIwanttochangemyworkingenvironment,I'dliketofindajobwhichismorechallenging.MoroverMotorolaisaglobalcompany,soIfeelIcangainthemostfromworkinginthiskindofcompanyennvironment.ThatisthereasonwhyIcomeheretocompeteforthisposition. 　　IthinkI'magoodteamplayerandI'mapersonofgreathonestytoothers.AlsoIamabletoworkundergreatpressure. 　　That’sall.Thankyouforgivingmethechance. 　　It'sapleasuretomeetyouall-->It'smypleasure 　　I'mqualifiedforthisinterview.Qualified不是这样用的 　　(Aqualifieddoctor) 　　简单的一句I'amgrateful(表示感谢)tobechosenforthisinterview就可以了 　　Iamgraduatefromshanghaidonghuivocationalandtechnicalschool.Graduate已是动词.-->Igraduatedfrom...(最好加上年份,如lastyear,in2006等) 　　major-->majored表示过去式 　　"Isreadingthetechnicalcollege,studiesisthebusinessmanagementspecialty?"不明白...我猜你是想说 　　-->Ispecializedinbusinessmanagement.我专攻商业管理 　　Ionceworkedinthetransportagentcompanyasthemerchandiser.Once可以省略,我反而认为如能说出这职业为你带来了什么好处会重要些,即你在处事方面有何改善,学懂了什么技能,知识,沟通技巧,这些会对你要应徵的这份工作有什么好处,而令主持面试者觉得你有能力胜任这工作 　　-->Havingworkedinatransportationagency,(用a,因之前没有提过是哪一公司,用agency,已代表了这机抅,用transportation,因我看到外国的都是这么叫)Ihavelearnttocooperatewith(合作)oneanother,Ihaveimprovedmycommunicationskillswhichwillhelpmeworkefficiently.(有效率地) 　　adaptivecapacityisstrong-->myadaptivecapacityishigh 　　"itisserioustowork?"不明白...还是你是想说这对工作很重要? 　　-->Thesequalities(素质)areveryimportant. 　　myhobbyisatwritting,reading,singingandtraveling.-->Myhobbiesarewriting,reading,singingandtraveling. 　　或地道些-->Writing,reading,singingandtravelingaremyfavorites(所爱好的).Ienjoythemverymuch. 　　Iamveryinterestedinthisposition这句感觉怪怪的...英文来说只是表现出你对这工作感兴趣 　　-->Ireallywouldliketobea/an___(工作名称),whichcancertainly(肯定)providemewithmorechancesandchallenges(chances和challenges都是可以数的,而整句都能让人感到你的热诚)