请英语高手帮我点评一下这篇四级英语作文,非常感谢(语法和用词,如果总分15分,你能给我多少）
1：据调查显示,现在大学生每月的花销越来越高,很多大学生花钱如流水,根本没有节俭的概念.
2：分析产生这一现象的原因
3：我的看法
ExtravagantSpendingoncollegeCampus
Nowmanycollegestudentsspendmoreandmore,theyspendastherunnningwaterwithouttheideaofthrifty,accordingtoasurvey.
Therearemanyreasonsforthissituation.First,mostofcollegestudengtsdon'tknowthedifficultyofearnmoney.Second,theydon'tgothroughthetoughlifeandknowthetroubleoflife.Third,theyadvocatesthefamousbrand,theyareprideoftheirclothesbutnottheirstudy.
Astome,Ithinkeveryoneshouldsavemoneywhateveryouhavemuchmoneyornot,speciallythecollegestudents.Moreover,thecollegestudents'feeismostfromtheirparents,theycan'tearnmuchmoneywhentheystillasastudent.Sotheymustsavemoneyandshouldn'tspendextravagant.Inaworld,thirftyisatraditionalvirtue,weshouldsavemoneybutshouldn'tsaveextravagant.
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