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雅思作文批改评分

14号就要上考场了麻烦大家给看看这能是什么水平啊~

PART2:Q:researchindicatesthatthecharacteristicswearebornwithhavemuchmoreinfluenceonourpersonalityanddevelopmentthananyexperienceswemayhaveinourlife.

Whichdoyouconsidertobethemajorinfluence?

Currently,therearesomescientificevidencesshowingthatone’sinherentcharacteristicsaremuchmoreinfluentialtotheirfuturelife.However,Ithinkaveragepeoplestillshouldbelievethatasuccessfullifedoesn’tsimplyrelyongeneticfactors.

Superficially,peoplecouldinheritsuperiorcharacteristicsfromtheirparents,thesignificantinfluenceofupbringingenvironmentalsoplayavitalroleindeterminingtheirfuturetrace.Borninafamilywithparentsaddictedtogamblingordrugs,themosttalentedchildrencanhardlygrowintousefuladults.Practically,theywillengageinjuveniledelinquencyastheygrowup.Incontrast,studentswhogetpropereducationandlivewithlovingparentswillbeabletoownapromisingfutureandapositivetrait.Apartfromthis,peoplecannotdenytheimpressiveinfluenceoftravelingexperienceonexpendingone’svision.Individualsareofferedachancetolearnaboutotherculturesanddifferentpeoplewhichcandeveloptheirknowledgeandre-modetheirmind.

Admittedly,itiscommontofindseveraltalentedpupilswhocansolvecomplexmathproblemsquicklyandaccurately.Also,therearechildrenwhobornwithadorableappearance,thisistheiradvantageovertheaverage-lookingpeerstogetmorepraises.However,theseadvantagescannotlastlong.Manycaseshaveillustratedthat,withouthardworkingintheirlaterlife,theborngeniusendedupachievingnothing.Onlybyconsistentlystudyingandcontinuallyeffortscansomeonetrulybecomegreat.

Inconclusion,resultsformtheresearchmayhavebeencarefullyproofedandcanbetrusted,however,theinfluenceofotherfactorssuchaseducationareofimportance.

罗赛回答:
  题目对吗?你写的内容非常一般.得分不超过5.
李乃昌回答:
  题目是对的,你是觉得内容不好还是词汇句型之类的呢?如果两个都不怎么地,哪个需要更多的提高,5啊这也太悲剧了
罗赛回答:
  三言两语说不好。词汇还行,内容不够切题,中心思想不突出。
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