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topictheworldisgettingsmallerandsmaller
100词以上
包含以下要求现代化的交通工具越来越发达
人与人之间的交往越来越频繁
结论
Whatiswidelybelievedtousallthattheworldisgettingsmallerandsmaller.Withthedevelopmentofmoderntransportation,itisconvenientforpeopletotravelfromoneplacetoanother.Thankstocurrenttechnology,wecangoanywherefreelyifwewant.Andtherearetransportationsforustochoose.Forinstance,planes,taxis,buses,trains.
Inaddition,thecommunicationwithpeopleallovertheworldismorefrequent.Alsothepriceoftransportationisevencheap.Wehavemajorityofwaystokeepcorrespondencewithfriends.Eventhoughwearefarawayfrom,wecancommunicatewitheachothereasily.
Allinall,theworldnowisbecomingsmaller.Peoplehavenodifficultiesintravellandcommunication.
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