Dear**,
IamplanningtodomyundergraduatedegreeintheUKafterhighschool.I'meagertoseemoreoftheworldnow,andtheUKhasagoodreputationworldwideforeducation.Itwillbetheplaceformetobuildacdemicknowledge,aswellastheabilitytodealwithdifferentcultures.
However,Iwillhavetoimprovemylanguagebeforegoingthere,sothatIcanadapttothesocietybythen.CouldyougivemesomeadvicesonwhatapectsshouldIwork?(后面是你具体情况,我瞎编的,如果需要可以改)Iamaimingatanaverageof6fortheIELTSexam.ReadingandListeningtestsworrymelessthantheOraltestandwritingpart.ItseemsthatIalwaysfailtousetherighttense,especiallywhenIwriteanessayinarush.Furthermore,sometimesIcouldnotrecalltherightwordwhenIspeak,andIjustdon'tknowwhattosay.Itisveryembarrassing.WhatdoyouthinkIcandotoimprove?
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ps,这是书信体哈.