SAT作文这样写可以吗?
[Whatmotivatepeopletochange?FromOGtest1]
MyfamilyislocatedintheYangtzeRiver.Onedayatdusk,whenIwasonarockingchairenjoyingthefreshairandthemagazinewhenIsuddenlyranovermybrother,an11yearsoldboy.”BOA,whatdoyouthinkcontributedtopeople'schanged?”“What?Whydidyousuddenlyaskingsuchaquestion?”Iwasverysurprised.“It’shomework.Oh,Ireallydonotunderstandthat…..”“Allright”Iquestionedhisteachersecretlyinmyheart,whilesympathetictomybrother,butIknowthisisagoodopportunitytoteachhim.
“Ithinkitshouldbetherelentlessandinnatedesireforself-improvement.JustlookattheYangtzeRiver”Helookeddownmyfingers,thedirectionoftheriver”Wouldyouliketoknowwhywaterisalwaysinthestream?Youcanputwaterashuman,whilethoselower-lyingareasaretheinadequaciesofpeople.Watercontinuouslyflowtofillthelowlands,thesamegoesforpeople,theyalsoneedchangingtomakeupfortheirownshortcomings,whichisthereasonwhypeoplecontinuouslychange,waterconstantlyflow.”
Henoddedindefinitely;Iknowhewasthinkingsomething.”But…..”
“Ok,Iknow,therearetoomanyexamplesofthat,theconvincingdegreearenotstrong,right?Buthaveyouheardaboutthis?”Ishowedhimthe‘ScientificAmerican’magazineinmyhand”ofcourse,sowhat…”“Well,Imean,forthisproblem,scientistshavedonestudiesonthesame!Atthattime,scientistsstudiedthehistoryofmanyfamouspeople,andinvitedanumberontheForbesbillionaireslistcelebritiestoanexclusiveinterviewandfoundmostofthempeoplehavethehabitofprobing,theyarenotsatisfiedwiththestatusquo.Youknow,AlbertEinsteinnotsatisfiedwiththegivenNewton'slawsofmechanics,andthusproposedspecialrelativity;Wattwasnotsatisfiedwiththelevelofproductivityandthusinventedthesteamengine.Intheend,scientistshavecometowhatIjustsaidthesameconclusion.”
“That’scool!LetmynameontheForbesbillionaireslistismydreamah!”hegiggled.”Samehere,”Ismiledandthought,fortunately,thismagazineisnotinvainset.
“Butdon'tbiased,"Iadded,"Sometimespeopleareforcedtochange;thisisanothermatter,aminorityafterall.Soyoustillkeepinmindthatsomeother
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