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【求助+有赏】求英语达人帮忙润色教师推荐信.推荐信是我自己从中文翻译过去的,由于水平有限,肯定不少问题.我希望能改的能地道一些,更像老师的口吻.DearAdmissionCommittee,Asanassociateprofesso
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【求助+有赏】求英语达人帮忙润色教师推荐信.

推荐信是我自己从中文翻译过去的,由于水平有限,肯定不少问题.我希望能改的能地道一些,更像老师的口吻.

DearAdmissionCommittee,

AsanassociateprofessorinCapitalNormalUniversityofChina,IhavehadthepleasureofknowingYangDanyuforoneyear.Athisrequest,Iammorethanhappytowritethisletterofrecommendation.

IfirstnoticedthisstudentwhensheappliedtomeforjoininginmyprogramgroupinUndergraduateScientificandTechnologicalInnovationProject.Accordingtotherecommendationfromthevice-prexy,Iagreetoaddherin.Asshewasafreshmanthen,Igavehersomebasictasksandletherfollowtheothergroupmembers.Afteraperiodofobservation,IhaveperceivedthatYangistalentedandresponsiblestudent.Shetakestheprogramreallyseriouslyandlearnsveryfast.Ineachgroupdiscussion,sheisoutstandingbecauseofherenthusiasmandenterprise.Sheiseagertolearnmoreandshethinkshard.Moreover,sheiscapabletogetalongwithothersverywellandworkwithotherspleasantly.Shefinishedeachtaskinearnestandhandedinthemintime.

字数超了,那我再摘重要一段:

Yangappliedherownprogramcalleddataminingfortheimprovementofcoursesystemastheleaderofthegroup.ThetitleoftheprogramwasproposedbyherselfandIamreallyinterestedinitasthereisfewstudyaboutit.Shecameupwiththeideathatassociatecourseinformationinthesearchengineonlinewiththecoursesystem.Thisideanotonlycanimprovingelectivesystem,alsoproposeanewwayofusingsearchengineapproachefficiently.

高惠芳回答:
  1.第一句不要用hadthepleasureofdoing,2.总觉得用athisrequest不太好,最好能写出他需要推荐信的理由,以及我很乐意写这样一封信3.第二段第三行agreed4.在经过一段时期的观察以后那一句,不用完成时用过去时t...
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