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Afterthestory”UnderTheMoon”
ThisisaSciencefictionabouttheearth.
Kaihandrillaareleadingactor.ThereareworkinginspaceshipOM-45.Oneday,thesatellitegavesomediffenertnumberabouttheAOL.theyfoundtheAOLisbreakingup.
TheEarthiaatrisk.sotheywanttoseethecommanderofEarthandtalkaboutthisproblem.
theEarthcommandercalledGogistherichestmanonEarthandtheworstmanonEarth.Twoyearsago,amannamedAdaihasfoundtheholeintheAOL,andhetoldtotheGogbecausehewantedmoremoneyfortheAOL.butEarthcommanderwasveryangil,hesentAdaitothecolonyundertheMoon.whytheearthcommanderdidthat,becausehedosen’tliketheearth,hewanttoliveinMars,heismakingaspaceshipforMars.
Ontheway,kaihandrillasawthecommanderofAustralia,.heisakindman,helovetheearth—hewanttoprotectthisplanet.sohewanttohelpkaihandrilla.
Whenkaihandrillasawtheearthcommander—Gogandaftertalk,Gogwasveryangryandputhiminprison.
EveryonehateGog.whenZadakknowkaihandrillawasinprison,hewantedtokillGog,butheisn’tsucced,andGogkilledhim.
Gogveryangry,hewanttodestroyearth.
CaptainofspaceshipOM-45—sernsavedkaihandrilla.andthenAdaitookthemtotheMoon.
Storyisconclude.whatwillbecomeoftheearth?
Afterthestory,Ithink,weshouldprotectourenvironment,protectourplanet.
Inourlife,weshouldn’tleavelitter.weshouldprotectionofwaterresources.Weshoulddomorethingstoprotectourplanet.
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