求改作文《Electricity》
《Electricity》
Electricityplaysaveryimportantroleinourdailylife.Wecan'tlivewithoutelectricity.Electricityisinvisible,butwecanchangeitintodifferentformsofenergy.Electricitycomesfromapowerstation.Itisconnectedtothecablesthatburiedunderthestreet.Andthecablesareconnectedtothethinwires.Electricitythroughsthethinwiresthencomesintoourflats.Electricityisagoodservantbutadangerousone.Ononehand,itisgoodanduseful.Itbringsalotofconveniencestoourlife.Forexample,fridges,ovensandvacumncleanersaveourtimetodothehomework.Everydaywonderssuchascomputersandtelevisionstobringentertainmentandnewstous.Ontheotherhand,sometimeselectricitywillcausefiresandaccients.Soweshouldbecarefulwithitandnoplaywithit.Therefore,useelectricityproperlyisabletomakeourlifecolorfulandhelpthesocietydevelop.
求改作文语法问题及内容