帮看下有米有病句!(英文那个啥米滴)
有些米学过,乱写滴
MyHobbies
Ihavesomehobbies.Collectingstamps,singingandplayingcomputergames.
ihavesomestamps.Myfavoritestampsaresomestampsaboutthe2008olympicgames.Ilikeitverymuch.Theyareverynice.
Andsingingismyhobby,too.whenIhappyorsad,Ilikesinging.Singingmakesmehappy.
还有
再给藕歌结尾.
总觉得跟哪个题目还有些距离,看看哪还能加些?
要在班上念,
还有会不会太短了点
上面有个错的点
那个
ilikethemverymuch