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英语达人麻烦帮看下有什么错误没有,帮修改下,

Shortlybefore,Ihavemadeagrouppresentationwithmyfriends.ThisismyfirstyearinUKandfirstpresentationintheuniversity.Sowechoseatopicwhatisthebenefitsandthedisadvantagesofgoingtouniversity.Accordingtoresearch,Icanfindsomedisadvantagesfromthestudentsofstudyinuniversity,andIwillavoidthesemistakesinmylifeofuniversityandgetanexcellentperformanceinthefirstyear.

Whenweknowwehaveagrouppresentation,westartedtodiscussaboutchoosingtopic.Bydiscussing,wechosetopicaboutuniversity.Thenwestartedtoresearchmaterialsandcollectdataaboutthistopic,andwecanalsofindnewsofrelationwithstudentsofuniversitybytheInternet.Moreover,wealsofindsomeproblemsfromoursurroundingstudents.AndthenwemakeaPowerPointandstartedtopracticethispresentation.

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  Shortlybefore,Ihavemadeagrouppresentationwithmyfriends(时态不对,应该是过去式)imadea...ThisismyfirstyearinUKandfirstpresentationintheuniversity(代词最好用it,时态仍然是过去式)...
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