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Shortlybefore,Ihavemadeagrouppresentationwithmyfriends.ThisismyfirstyearinUKandfirstpresentationintheuniversity.Sowechoseatopicwhatisthebenefitsandthedisadvantagesofgoingtouniversity.Accordingtoresearch,Icanfindsomedisadvantagesfromthestudentsofstudyinuniversity,andIwillavoidthesemistakesinmylifeofuniversityandgetanexcellentperformanceinthefirstyear.
Whenweknowwehaveagrouppresentation,westartedtodiscussaboutchoosingtopic.Bydiscussing,wechosetopicaboutuniversity.Thenwestartedtoresearchmaterialsandcollectdataaboutthistopic,andwecanalsofindnewsofrelationwithstudentsofuniversitybytheInternet.Moreover,wealsofindsomeproblemsfromoursurroundingstudents.AndthenwemakeaPowerPointandstartedtopracticethispresentation.