帮忙改一下英语作文
Astudentwhoisafreshmanthathavehadacomputer,aMPfourwhenhecomintotheuniversity.Itspendmuchmoneybuyingit.
Ourclasshavehadaheateddiscussionaboutthestudents.Opinionsaredividedintotwo.thinkingthestudenthavearichfamilyduringhisuniversities'lifeisbettertobuythesethings.othersholdtheoppositeopinionitisnotgoodtomakeagoodbehave.
Asfarasiamconcerned,thestudentshouldtakesilentattitudestwardstheproblem,andbethrifty,andstudyhard.
满分25,我们老师给我打了13分,我觉的不太好,可能是语法上和用词上有问题,帮忙改改,谢谢.