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【帮忙改一下英语作文Astudentwhoisafreshmanthathavehadacomputer,aMPfourwhenhecomintotheuniversity.Itspendmuchmoneybuyingit.Ourclasshavehadaheateddiscussionaboutthestudents.Opinionsaredividedintotwo.think】
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帮忙改一下英语作文

Astudentwhoisafreshmanthathavehadacomputer,aMPfourwhenhecomintotheuniversity.Itspendmuchmoneybuyingit.

Ourclasshavehadaheateddiscussionaboutthestudents.Opinionsaredividedintotwo.thinkingthestudenthavearichfamilyduringhisuniversities'lifeisbettertobuythesethings.othersholdtheoppositeopinionitisnotgoodtomakeagoodbehave.

Asfarasiamconcerned,thestudentshouldtakesilentattitudestwardstheproblem,andbethrifty,andstudyhard.

满分25,我们老师给我打了13分,我觉的不太好,可能是语法上和用词上有问题,帮忙改改,谢谢.

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  Astudentwhoisafreshmanhaveacomputer,aMPfourwhenhecomeintotheuniversity.Itspendmuchmoneybuyit.Ourclasstakeahotdiscussionaboutthestudents.Opinionsaredividedintotwo....
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