英语(不难)帮我修改作文,把错误句子改了就行,加括号的词一定要用．ASurpriseDreamTodayisghostfestival!I'mvery(upset).Longlongago,anoldmantoldme"Dogcangiveyougoodluck."So,I(walkthedog)onmywaytoschool|小学英语问答-字典翻译问答网

英语(不难)帮我修改作文,把错误句子改了就行,加括号的词一定要用．ASurpriseDreamTodayisghostfestival!I'mvery(upset).Longlongago,anoldmantoldme"Dogcangiveyougoodluck."So,I(walkthedog)onmywaytoschool

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帮我修改作文,把错误句子改了就行,加括号的词一定要用．

ASurpriseDream

Todayisghostfestival!I'mvery(upset).Longlongago,anoldmantoldme"Dogcangiveyougoodluck."So,I(walkthedog)onmywaytoschool(inorderto)killghost.ButI(amconcernedabout)myself,soI(havegotto)hidethedogintomyschoolbag.WhenIrunintotheclass,mydogshout"oh,oh"(onpurpose).(Entire)presonlookatme.Myteachershoutme"I(addyourmarksup).Areyouwanttoknowyourmarks?A100-mark(survey),youonlyhave24.Andyoutakeyourdogintoschool.Soyoucan(packyourbookup)andgooutwithyourdognow.I(nolonger)saywhat.

Atdusk,Iwalkthedogon(highway).Sudden,mydogrunaway.Ishoutatmydog,butmydog(ignore)me.Irunawayfollowmydogatonce.ButIfail.Thisisastroungeplace.Thereisaoldbuilding.hereandthereare(dusty).Thereisamaningreen(overcoat)attheleftof(curtain).Hesay"I'maghost,I'ma(German)(Nazi).MynameisTom.Don'tworry.I'makindman.Oh,I'msorry,I'makindghost."IspeaktoTom"What'sup?CanIleave?""Oh,waitamoment.Don'tworry.I(settle)downheretoolong.I(sufferfrom)(loneliness)toolong.ButIcan'tleavehere.So,Iwantamanto(gossip)withme(facetoface)"IthinkofIcan'tsay"Idisagree",soIsay"OK."Hesays"I(fallinlove)a(Jewish)girlin(Netherlands)(Amsterdam),hernameis(Kitty).Butshe(wastiredof)Nazi.(Margot),aGermangirl,sheloveme,butI(dislike)Margot."Isay"Whyareyousettledownhere?"Hesays"Youneedn'tknow.Oh!It'stimetoleave,bye-bye."Sudden,athunderhitme.Oh,mygod!

Oh!Isitasurprisedream?Ihaveaheadache.Thinkof(aseriesof)surprisething.Ionlycansaytomyself"It'sasurprisedream."

在"killghost."和"ButI(amconcernedabout)myself"中间漏掉了一句"WhenIarriveatschool,theguardstopmefromtakingmydogintoschool."

希望你帮我再看一下

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　　写得很有想象力,加油! 　　ASurprisingDream 　　TodayisGhostFestival!AndI'mvery(upset).Longlongago,anoldmantoldme,"Dogcanbringyougoodluck."SoI(walkthedog)toschool(inorderto)killghost.ButI(amconcernedabout)myself,soI(havegotto)hidethedoginmyschoolbag.WhenIrunintotheclass,mydogbarks(onpurpose).The(entire)classlookatme.Myteacheryellsatme:"I(addyourmarksup).Doyouwanttoknowyourmarks?Outofa100-mark(survey),youonlyget24.Andyoutakeyourdogtoschool.Now(packyourbookup)andgooutwithyourdog.Youcan(nolonger)behere."Sadly,Ileaveschool. 　　Atdark,Iwalkthedogon(highway).Suddenly,mydogrunsaway.Ishoutatmydog,butit(ignores)me.Ihavetorunafterit.ButIcan'tcatchup.Thisisastrangeplace.Thereisanold(dusty)building.Amaningreen(overcoat)isstandingattheleftof(curtain).Hesays:"I'maghost,a(German)(Nazi).MynameisThomas.Butdon'tworry.I'makindman.Oh,I'msorry,I'makindghost."IspeaktoThomas:"What'sup?CanIleave?""Oh,waitamoment.Pleasedon'tworry.I(settle)downherefortoolong.I(sufferfrom)(loneliness).ButIcan'tleavehere.SoIwantsomeoneto(gossip)with(facetoface)."IthinkIcan'tsayno,soIagree.Hesays:"I(fellinlove)witha(Jewish)girlin(Amsterdam),(Netherlands),hernamewas(Kitty).Butshe(wastiredof)Nazi.AGermangirlnamed(Margot)lovesme,butI(dislike)Margot."Iask:"Whydoyousettledowninhere?"Heanswers:"Youneedn'tknow.Oh!It'stimetoleave,bye-bye."Suddenly,athunderhitme.Oh,mygod!ThenIwokeup 　　Ihaveaheadache.Thinkingof(aseriesof)surprisingthings,Icanonlysaytomyself:"It'sasurprisingdream." 　　补充修改我发消息了.