帮帮我看看句子对吗?谢谢你们了!
Icanhavefunfromtheworkandalsocanhelpotherstobeingmehappiness.
IhavestudiedinTorontofor3monthsinordertoimprovemyenglish.
Iaminterestedindifferentcultures.SoIlliketocommunicatewithforforeigners.
Ineedtogetastablejobandearnenoughmoneytoaffordmylife.
这些句子都对吗?谢谢你们了我比较着急希望大家能帮帮我.
第一句错了是bringmehappiness