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AhFuandmysister
AhFuisadog.Asforit'sadog.Weallproudofit.
Oneday,thewholefamilywenttoworkonthefield.TakemysisterandAhFualone.TheparentswereworkingwhenmysisterplayingbytheriverwithAhFu.Whenshewasjustabouttopickaflower.Shefellintotheriver.AhFusawthese.Itwasbarkingthenjumpedintotheriver.MyparentsheardAhFu'sbark.Runintotheriveratonce.Bythistime.AhFuwasswimmingtomysisterandtakinghertothebank.MyparentswassopleasedandpraisedAhFuwarmly.
Becauseofthis.WeallproudofAhFu.
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