英语翻译
夏天的几个月里,修道院十分忙碌,因为有成千上万的人驾车通过山口,顺道来修道院参观.由于来人太多,狗被关在专门的围栏里.
Duringthesummer,monasterywastoobusy,inthatthousandsofpeoplewoulddrivedcrossingthepass,bythewaytheyvisitedthemonastery,becauseofthiscase,dogsofthemonasterywerelockedinthepen.
关键是就这句话具体指出错在哪为什么?怎么改