高人帮我看看,这篇英语写的可以吗?帮我修改一下谢谢了
Wishyouhaveahappynewyearofthedragon.foryearofthedragonthatisworthremembering
inthepastyearlifeisbetterandbetter,whetheritisloveorlearning,Iwillbeveryhardmakeitbetter
Experiencedalotofthingsafterhighschool,Allthepast,becomememorynow.
Oftenthinkiandmygoalisstillfaraway
It’sjustlikedriving.Whenyou’redrivinginacar,itcanbehardtosee
whereyouareandwhereyou’reheadingto.Ontheotherhand,pausingfora
shortmomenttolookatthemapcanbeamazinglyhelpful.Whereareyouright
now?Howfarhaveyoutraveled?Wheredoyouwanttogoto?
Myfriendsaremybiggestaccomplishmentsthisyear.
Loveismygreatesthappinessthisyear.
ThenewyearIwillbeveryhardmakeitbetter.
(MyEnglishispoor,sosorry)