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Thesmilebehindthetear
Inrecently,afamoussentencewasreceivedsocialpeoplefromallwalksoflife.Itissaidthepaymentisproportionaltotheharvestintheverydegree.Thankstothesupportingofthisbelief,apartofpeopleofuswaswillingtoworkdayandnight,evensacrifcedsomethingtogainwhatwewanted.Theydearmedonedaythattheycanfacetotheworldwiththesmileandsay“Iwillsucceed”
IstillrememberedthatIhadseenamovie“ThePursuitOfHappiness”.Itisahero,whoisinmiddleage,whobeganholdingontohisdream.Hehadfewmaterialpossessionssothathehadtomoveformplacetoplacetomakealiving.However,hewasagoodexample,whichwewasworthlearningfrom,forhedidn’tadmirethepeoplewhodrovealuxuriouscarorhadarespectedjob.Hejustwanttowinasimplesmilethatmeanshappinessinhisheartofhearts.Then,hestartedtoachievehisdreamwithstrengthandpatience.
Everytimewhensomethingholdhimbackfrombeingallhecanbe,healwayssmiledtofaceallthefrustrationsinfrontofthepeoplebutweptatnight.Whenthedreameventuallycametrue,itisthefirsttimethathecan’thelpcryinginfrontofthepeople.
ThereasonwhyIconfrontthesuninsistentlyisthatIdon’twanttoletothersseetheshadowbehindme.AndreasonwhyIalwayssmileisthatIjustwanttosharemyhappinesswithmyfriends.
Inall,everyinspiredsmileishardtogain.