看一下这个,哪里有错的都指出来,水平很低的啊!
Iliketravel.BecauseitcanmakemehappyandIcanlearnmanythingsfrom
everyplacesintheworld.IwenttravelwithmymumwhenIwassix.Fromthenon,
IwillgotoaplacethatIhaven’tbeenoneachsummerholiday.SoIhadbeento
manyplacesintheworld.LikeAmerica,Thailand,Malaysia,Singapore…That’sthe
overseas.InChina,IhadbeentoGuilin,Beijing,HongKong,Macao,Sitsang,
Guizhou…Oh,somany!IgiveaprofundityimpressionofAmericaandSitsang.I
wenttoAmericawithmyclassmateandteacherfor13days.Butwithnoparents.
That’sveryinterestingIthink.SoImusttakecareofmyself.Wehadbeento
SanFrancisco,LosAngel,NewYorkandWashingtonD.C..ButL.A.isthemost
interesting.BecauseThereisaDisneyandHollywood.Andit’smuchbiggerthan
theoneinHongKong!AlsoSitsangmakemesurprise.That’sthemostbeautiful
placethatIhadseen.IfIhaveachanceIwillshowthephotoofSitsang’stoyou!
Ienjoytravelling.That’swhythetitleofthisarticleis“Travelinmylife”!