雅思小作文批改(剑5test1)
Thegraphillustratesthedramaticcomparisonoftheproportionofthepopulationaged65andoverduringtheperiodfrom1940to2040in3countries.
Whenitcomestojapan,itsproportionstartedintheyearof1940inapositionfrom5%toapproximate3%until1960,followedbyastabletendencybeforerestartingtotheoriginallevelintheyearof2000.
InviewofSwedenandUSA,whichdemonstrateaconstantlyincreasingmovement,starteditselffrom7%and9%to16%and14%foreachduringthesameperiodasthefirstcountry.
Itisworthmentiongthattheexpectedproportionsin3countriesareblessedwithanoticeableclimbing,especiallyJapan,whichascendsharplyto27%inthelast2decades.Astotheothercountries,SwedenandUSAallexperiencemoderateincreaseinthelast2decades,hitting25%and24%respectively,althoughswedensufferfromalittlefluctuationintheyearfrom2000to2020.
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