Itismoreimportanttochoosefriendsthatcanhavefunwithyouthantochoosefriendsthatwillhelpyouwhenyouneedthem.(其实按照整篇来看,作者要选的是能帮你的朋友而不是酒肉朋友,所以开头的这句话,顺序错了,应该为Itismoreimportanttochoosefriendswhocanhelpyououtwhenyouareintroublethanthosecanonlyhavefunwithyou.) 　　One’slifecan’tbedepartedwithfriends.Butasfortheproblem（个人推荐用Point）tochose(Chose应改成Choose,可能是拼写错误)whichtypeoffriends, 　　thosehavefunwithyouarethosewhohelpyouwhenyouneed,everyonehavea 　　differentchoose（Choose应该改成Choice.Haveachoice是一个搭配.Choose是动词不能做名词）.Personally,Ipreferthelatterone. 　　Actually, 　　thosewhowillonlymakeyourlaughmusthaveapropose（Propose是Verb,可能是拼写错误,可能作者想拼成purpose.purpose:企图,目的）.Usually,theywantto 　　obtain（建议用get,Obtain一般指通过努力得到好的东西,词性带褒义.可用Get,中性色彩）somethingfromyou.Forexample,myaunt,Jane,oncehadafriendthat 　　alwaysmakeherhappywhenshewassingle.Healwaysgavemyauntlotsofpresentsorgotravelwithmy 　　aunt.Myauntwaspleased,andstartedtothinkaboutmarryhim.However,when 　　myauntlostpartofherfortune,(shewasquitewealthybefore)themanleft 　　herwithoutsayingaword.Wecanfindthistypeofstoriesonthenewspaper 　　everyday,whenwemeetthosewhowoulddonothingbutonlyhavefunwithyou,but 　　leaveyouorfindanexcusewhenyouaskforhelp,weshouldn’tbetheir 　　friends. 　　Second,Ihaveto 　　saythattruefriendwillnotalwayspleaseyou.Forexample,inthebookEmma, 　　Mr.knightlyisEmmatruefriend,butheoftentoldEmmahershortpoints.Such 　　asafterEmmalaughedotherpeopleatthepicnic,Mr.Knightlytoldhershewas 　　tooproud,thatmadeEmmaquietangry.But,duetoMr.knightlyunwelcome 　　words,Emmahavechangedtoabettergirl.Thatistosay,friendswhoalwayshave 　　funwithyou,appreciateyouorpleaseyou,arenotallyourtruefriends.Instead, 　　thatareevenbadforyou. 　　Inaddition,as 　　theproverbruns,thosewhohelpyouareyourtruefriends.Really,friendsare 　　thosewhocareaboutyou,andgiveyouahandorundergothetroublewithyou. 　　Certainly,weshouldchoosethentobeourfriend. 　　So,inshort,Certainly,weshouldchoose 　　themtobeourfriendinsteadofthosewhocanonlymakeyoufeelhappy.andIwouldtoso. 　　在煲汤还没看完待会继续!有层次,思路很清晰.不错哦!