请英语达人来点评一下这篇作文,这是一篇高中生作文,要纠正一下语法或拼写错误,并写出需要改进的地方
DearSirandMadam:
MynameisLiHua,Iamastudentofyourschoolsummercamp,MyaimtowritethisletteristhatIwanttomakeanappointmentwiththelearningcenter.Thereasonareasfollow.
First,AsaChinese,Wehavethedifferentcookingstyle,ItappearstotheChinese,Weshould
eathotfoodandsoup.butinEngland.Ionlyeatbread.becausethefoodissocoldSecondIhopeyoucangivemeanaccurateaccountofHowtousethelibrarycomputer.Thereisaconfusingforme.
TheMondayafternoonandFridayissuitableformetomeetyouforanother,ifyouareOK,
Pleasecallme:****.
Lookingforwardtoyourreply!
Yours
LiHua