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Mybestfriend
Mybestfriendistime.Sheisbothmybestfriendandmyteacher.Igottoknowherthirteenyearsago.
Timeisveryequity.Sheisnevergivesanyonemoretimeorgivesotherpeoplefewtime.Ifyouworkhard,timeisverykind.Shecanmakeyoufeeltimeisverylong.Butifyoudon'tkonwhowtousetime,evenwastetime,timewillbeveryshort.
Timeisalsomygoodteacher.Sheteachesmealotofthings,suchassavingtimeandthings,holdingchangceandsoon.
Timeletsmekonwshouldplanfuture.IwanttobeapsychologistwhenIgrowup.Ithinkpsychologistcanhelplotsofpeoplesolvetheirproblems.TimethinksIwillbeaverygoodpsychologist.
TimeandIalthoughnevermeeteachother,butwewillalwaysbethebestfriend.