请帮忙修改英语演讲稿.MyDreamofLife.
1、请找出这篇演讲稿的语法错误并加以改正；
2、个人认为这篇演讲稿（我自己写的,我是个高二学生,但英语不太好）太中文化,希望可以得到指点,提升档次.
3、假如你是评审,在听了我的演讲后,你会提出什么问题,我应该如何作答?
感激不尽.
演讲稿正文如下：
MyDreamofLife
Goodmorningeveryone!It’smygreatpleasuretospeakhere.I’mgoingtosharemytopicwithyou——mydreamoflife.
Thedreamsarelikeflowers,gorgeousandclourful.Thedreamsarealsolikethesunspiritedandvigorous.Soifamanhasadreamthathewillbefullofenergyandgoaheadboldly.
SosmallasIam,Ihaveagreatdream.Iwanttobeateacher,andthendevelopethecourseofeducationtoenhancetheknowledgeandmoralspiritsofpeople,Thisismydream,aloftydream.
Inmylife,thereisateacherwhohasinfluencedmedeeply.Shehasmademedetermined,positiveandconfident.BeingmyChineseteacher,shehadaccompanyedmefromGrade3toGrade6.Durinethedays,ShealwaysencouragedmewithherloveeverytomeImetsetbacks.WhenImadesomeprogressshewouldalsoremindmetobemodest.ThedaybeforeIwasleavingtheprimaryschool,shesaidtome“YouaresplendidsoIbelievethatyouwillgaingreatsuccess.Besureandbelievethekindnessandmoralsdoalwaysexist.Ihopeyoucandoyourbesttomaketheworldmorebeautiful.”Myteacher’swordsinspiredme,sofromthenon,mydreamcameintobeing.Iamdeterminedtobeateacheranddevelopthecourseofeducationtosowtheseedsofhope.
NowIamaseniorhighschoolstudent,eachtimeIchokedontheweightyschoolworkIwouldthinkofmydream,soIcouldcheermyselfuprightaway.Mydreamencouragemetomoveonandinspiremenevergivewp.
Inordertoachievemydream,Iwillstudyhardtoperfectmyselfandfaceourlifeactivelyandoptimistically.Asanoldsayinggoes“Allthingscometothosewhowait”.Idobelievethatinthenearfuture,Iwillbeanexcellentteacher.Iwillachievemydream!Yes,Ican!
OK!That’sall.Thankyouforlistening.
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