求大神改下这篇高中英语作文【满分25分】能得几分?题目是大意是让你向经理投诉旅游遭遇.
Dearmanager
thanksforyoureadingthisletter.MynameisLihua,atravellerofBeijingBranchChinaInternationalTravelagency.
Imeetmanyterriblethingsinthistravel.Allofthetravel,manythingswentwrong.wedidnotsawplacesofourpromiseandtheguildersaidIshouldtobuysomeneednotgoods,ifIwanttoleavethere.Ifeelangry.
So,yourcampanyshouldapologizetoallthetravellersinthepublicmedia,ifyoucannotdothis.Iwillsueyourcompany.
Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply
yours
LiHua