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帮忙修改一个英文作文dearliming,hi,ihavefounditdifficultfotyoutogetonwiththeclass,ithinkyoushouln'tbeupset.therearelotsofwaystohelpyou.iknowyouarealittleshyandyoumustbeafraidofmakingnewfriends,you
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dearliming,

hi,ihavefounditdifficultfotyoutogetonwiththeclass,ithinkyoushouln'tbeupset.therearelotsofwaystohelpyou.

iknowyouarealittleshyandyoumustbeafraidofmakingnewfriends,youdon'tneedtodoso,youshouldbemoreconfident.infact.ourclassmatesareveryfriendly.

youshouldtrytochatwiththemrelaxing.youalsoneedtotakepartinallkindsofactivitiesasmuchaspossible.andyoushouldlearntohelpothers.youshouldtryyourbesttoshowyourtalentandtheteacherwilllikeyoubetter.ofcourse,youneedtoworkhard.

goodluck

yours...

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  大写处为更改的地方   dearliming,   hi,ihavefounditdifficultFORyoutogetonwiththeclass.(一句话只有一个动词,除非是从句或有连接词连接,所以断开为两句)IDON'TTHINKYOUSHOULDbeupset.(对于Ithink的句子若为否定,则否定在THINK上,即DON'TTHINK)THERE(断为令一句话)arelotsofwaystohelpyou.   iknowyouarealittleshyandyoumustbeafraidofmakingnewfriends,BUT(加连接词,使句子更连贯)youdon'tneedtodoso.(断开)youshouldbemoreconfident.infact,ourclassmatesareveryfriendly.   youshouldtrytochatwiththemRELAXED(形容人的形容词用ed结尾,若形容物体则用ing结尾).youalsoneedtotakeApartinDIFFERENT(后面有asmuchaspossible若这里用all则不通顺)kindsofactivitiesasmuchaspossible.andyoushouldlearntohelpothers.youshouldtryyourbesttoshowyourtalentandtheteacherwilllikeyoubetter.ofcourse,youneedtoworkhard.   goodluck   yours...   文章最大的问题就是一句话只有一个动词!所以又些句子要用句号分开,除非是从句
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