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塞翁失马的读后感
Ibelieveingoodandbadluck.AsIwinmarksix,itisappeartobealottery.Butformeitjustseemsastransientandephemeralasafleetingcloudanunimportantmatter.Whatevermymumuausllytellmedon’tbesillytobeliefthatunsafe
Ithinkthecharacterareluckyofthestory.becausetheirexperienceweregoodsincetobeginwiththeend.Themanlostafinehorseatthetime,buthedidnotdisappointed.heappeartobestaredthroughtheopenwindowsatthecloudsscuttlingpastthesun.Goodluckback,andblackluckcome.Weshouldhaveagreatfulheart.Takeasample,justliketheFinancialTsunami,allofpeoplefacetobeoutofwork.Maybesomeofthemarelostmoney.EveryonefeltfearforFinancialTsunami’scausingsocialproblem.HoweversomeonelucklyfindingajoborstartabusinessinaSlowEconomy.Sowhenwemeetwithpoornews,weshouldnotbediscouraged.Perhaps,badthingturntogoodthing.
我相信好运与恶运,就像我赢得六合彩(意思是中彩票),这样看起来有点靠运气,但对我而言,这看似过眼烟云的小事。不管什么样我妈妈总是跟我说不要傻傻地相信靠不住的运气
回答者110.6.99.*,"1"算是一个答案吗?我需要的答案是批改作文,
而不是阿拉伯数字,
我觉得故事中主角是幸运的,因为他们从始至终的经历都是好的,当时主角失去一匹好马,但他可没有失望。他看来好像凝视窗外匆匆飘过太阳的浮云。好运去…恶运来。我们应该有平常心,拿一个作比喻,就像金融海潇,许多人面临失业,或者他们失去财富。几乎每个人都怕金融海潇所带来的问题。然而,,有人逆景创业或找到工作,故此每当我们遇到倒霉的事情,我们别气馁,可能恶运转成好运
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