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高手请找出我的语法错误,Themainpurposeofthestudentsistolearnusefulknowledgeandputthemintorealpractice.Hereisaquestion,whichlearningmethodisthemostefficientwayforastudent?Studyinginatraditionalclassroomfrom

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高手请找出我的语法错误,

Themainpurposeofthestudentsistolearnusefulknowledgeandputthemintorealpractice.Hereisaquestion,whichlearningmethodisthemostefficientwayforastudent?Studyinginatraditionalclassroomfromteachersorlearnitbythemselves?Well,inmypointofview,Idefinitelywillchoosethefirstchoice.

First,teacherisaprofessionalpeoplewhohavesomuchteachingexperience,skills,and,ofcourse,themostimportantaspect--------professionalknowledge.Whenastudentarefacingsometoughquestionswhicharethemselvescannotunderstandwhywaswrong.Atthismoment,teachersnotjustcouldhelpyoutounderstandthosecertainsubjectquestions,suchascomefromMath,GeologyorEnglish.butalsopointsomeshortagesthatyoucouldneverfindthembyyourself.Ifastudentsfeelnervousduringtheexams,ofcoursedidnotdoitwell,andhavealowscore.Asaresult,thatstudentsmaythinkhimselfissostupidandmaybeevendonotwantstudyanymore.Atthismoment,ifapatientteachercansmoothhisnegativemoodbymeansofspeakingsoftbyheartandgivehimgreatconfidence,thenprobablythatstudentsmayconquerthisproblem.

Furthermore,ifstudentslearnknowledgebythemselvessometimestheyprobablycannotcatchthemainpointofknowledgeincertainsubject.Sincenomatterwhichsubjectthestudentchoose,Thereisvastresourceinthatsubject.Sometimes,whenstudentsgetintotheterritoryofknowledge,theyprobablygetlostonthewayoflearningknowledge.Ifthereisateacher,whohavesomanyteachingexperiencesforyearsandhaveefficienttactictohelphisorherstudentsidentifythemainusefulpoint,skippingthosedetailsfromamountofcertainknowledge.While,youcanimagine,thestudentscouldgotoanothernewheightthattheycouldnotseethembefore.

Inreality,Ishouldalsomentionthat,studentscannotmerelyrelyonteachersallthetime.Tobespecific,duringthevacationtime,ifstudentsfacesomeproblemsthatcannotfindsomehelpfromclassmatesorteacher,Whathecandoisusetheknowledgethathestudiedinschool,andfindsomerelatedmaterialsfromthelibraryorinternet.Inasense,maybethisisachancethatmakehimselftoexplorehisownpotential.

Inconclusion,Weshouldneverignoretheimpo

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　　1Studyinginatraditionalclassroomfromteachersorlearnitbythemselves? 　　前后应该对应一下吧,前面是动名词后面怎么成了learn了? 　　2Idefinitelywillchoosethefirstchoice 　　后面用choice不太好,一般不用chooseachoice吧? 　　3Whenastudentarefacingsometoughquestionswhicharethemselvescannotunderstandwhywaswrong. 　　astudent了后面怎么是are? 　　定从有点小问题,建议改为Whenastudentisfacingsometoughquestionswhichtheythemselvescan'tunderstand. 　　4teachersnotjustcouldhelpyoutounderstandthosecertainsubjectquestions,suchascomefromMath,GeologyorEnglish.butalsopointsomeshortagesthatyoucouldneverfindthem（去掉them)byyourself. 　　改为：teacherscannotonlyhelpyouunderstand...suchasmath(小写）butalsopointout(注意out)someshortagesthatyoucouldneverfindbyyourself. 　　5Ifastudentsfeelnervousduringtheexams,ofcoursedidnotdoitwell,andhavealowscore 　　students该为student(后面的也都改掉）ofcourse后改为hewon'tdoitwell 　　6Asaresult,thatstudents（去掉S）maythinkhimself（改为he)issostupidandmaybeevendo(doesn't)notwantstudyanymore.Atthismoment,ifapatientteachercansmoothhisnegativemoodbymeansofspeakingsoft(softly)byheartandgivehimgreatconfidence,thenprobablythatstudents(...)mayconquerthisproblem. 　　7Sincenomatterwhichsubjectthestudentchoose,Thereisvastresourceinthatsubject 　　把since该为because 　　8 　　Ifthereisateacher,whohave(has)somanyteachingexperiencesforyearsandhave(has)efficienttactictohelphisorherstudentsidentifythemainusefulpoint,skippingthosedetailsfromamountofcertainknowledge.While(however),youcanimagine,thestudentscouldgotoanothernewheightthattheycouldnotseethem(去掉them)before 　　9 　　Tobespecific,duringthevacationtime,ifstudentsfacesomeproblemsthat(加个they)cannotfindsome(去掉)helpfromclassmatesorteacher,Whathecandois(to)usetheknowledgethathestudied(learnt)inschool,andfindsomerelatedmaterialsfromthelibraryorinternet.Inasense,maybethisisachancethat(would)makehimselfto(去掉)explorehisownpotential. 　　10 　　Ofcourse,theprerequisite-------study（working/studying)hardmustbesatisfied. 　　我就当是做改错题啦,