英语病句修改
ThisistheschoolafterthefirsttimethatIsincerelyloveeverythinghere.
Lovethepeoplehere,lovethewarmandfriendlyhere.
Forthefirsttimebegantorecallwithnostalgiatheschoolhasnotyetcompleted.
Thismakesmeevenmoredonotknowwhatcoursetofollow.
Daybyday,timepassedby
Thenationaldayiscoming
Whileinstudy,considertheirownfate.
Reallytangledveryconfused.
However,learningisalwaysthemostimportantthing,
POSTERteacherletmeendlessfrustration.
Butsurprisingly,Itreatitcarefully.
WeusedtwostudiesupwritingmySOCIALPOSTERandthetopicwasCHINESEIDENTITY.
allofthesocialclassarefullofssposters
Isuddenlyfoundourschoolissobeautiful
Eventhecafeteria,theplayground
Theskyonourschool
Thewaytoschool
Inthisway,lifeinanorderlymanneroveramonth.
Amonthofthoughtandsentiment.
Amonthofgrowingandexperiences.
Amonthoftangledandsuffering.
FinallyIdecidedtostayhere.
Because,Icannotlivewithoutthepeopleherewhoareenthusiasmandfriendly.Icannotlivewithoutmygoodfriendsandteachershere.
EventhoughIknowtherearegoingtobealotof
EventhoughIknewrightawaytherewillbealotofpeoplethrowingusleft.
BecauseIknowthefuturewewilltogetherfacemoredifficultiesandchallenges.
Ourfuturewillbefarapartcheeringeachother.
Westillhavealotofgoodagreementandplans.
Wewilldefinitelyliveupto.
Becausewehavenowdonethefirststep:
Eventhoughfarapartandthendonotforgetthemselvestoeachotheralso.
Thesewonderfulvisionandgoalsareourmotivation.
Wearemadetopayallthesacrificeandareaimedatourcommonidealsandhappiness.
Andeveryonehereappreciatesthehardshipsandhappiness.
Iknowthatourschoolwillbecomemorebeautiful,
Theskywillbecomemoreblue.
几乎每句话都是病句、有哪位能帮忙改一下?