给我找错误,我自己写的短文
MynameisJack.lhaveabeautifuldream.lhopemyhonehavearobotinthefutureinthefuture.Therobotnameissuperman.llikesupermanverymuch.Becausehecoulddomanythings.Forexample,hecouldcleantheroom,cookdinner,playwithdogandplayfootball.Hewasalsoplaywithme.So,llikesupermanverymuch.
lhopemydreamcometure.
注意看看我的时态,那些词应该写成将来时的
错的给我改改