Welcometomyhometown!Nanjingismyhometown.Itisamodernandbusytown.Ithasalonghistory.Therearemanybigsupermarkets,beautifulgardensandgoodfactorieshere.Itisveryeasytogoshopping.Youcanseegreenhills,bigtreesandniceflowers.TherearemanyrestaurantsinHaimen.YoucanenjoyHaimengoat.Ittastesverydelicious.Manyvisitorscomeheretoenjoyit.
Therearemanygoodplacestovisit.ThereisaparkandabigShoppingMall.YoucanseefilmsinRenminTheatre.Myschoolisoneofthebestschoolsinmyhometown.ItisonChangjiangRoad.Itisverybeautiful.Ihopeyoucancomeandvisitsoon.
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