找人帮忙修改英语作文,初三的(上海)
IWillSucceed字数要求:60字以上
开头已给:Everyonehasdifficultiesinhislife...
1、Whenyouareintrouble,whatwillyousaytoyourself?
2、Whatwillyoudo?(Giveatleastoneexample)
Everyonehasdifficultiesinhislife,andsodoI.Differentpeoplehavedifferentideaswhenoneisintrouble.Atthattime,Iwillsaytomyself:"Iwillsucceed.",besides,Iwillworkharderandharderandnevergiveup.NothingistoodifficultifIputmyheartintoit.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway."Iwillsucceed"isthebestencouragementwhenImeetwithanydifficulty.
那个……不仅是语法错误需要修改出来,还有任何用词不当、搭配不当、文意重复、偏离题目之类都要修改出来……
总之就是大家来找茬,找得越多越好……修改得越完整越好……词汇用得越浅显越好,句子用得越复杂越好…………
TVT……拜托了!