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大概就是moderntechnology和simpletechnology你更prefer哪个.再改下错（单词拼写错误不算）.

Moderntechnologydidchangemylife.Inrecentyears,moreandmorepeopletendtoenjoyakindofso-called‘highlevelcivilization’lifewhichisfullyfilledwithmoderntechnology.Butisitreallyreasonabletoabandontheoldthingsweoncehadtomakeourpsatlifealittleeasier?Mypointofviewisabsolutelynot,foronlywhenthchnologyissimplercanwekeepourmindmoving,thusgiveusawiderspacetodothingsbyourselves.

Simpletechnologybringsusenormousbenefitwhichcannotbereplacedbythosemodernandcomplextechnology.Firstly,whenmoderntechnologyfirstcametooureyes,wemayfounditusefulandconvenientandfeltliketogetridofouroldlifestyle.Forthisreason,someofourculturewillsoondisappearandaslongasmoderntechnologycontinuetoexsistandexpense,ouroldculturewillneverbackagain.Weshouldpayattentiontothis:someyoungpeoplehavealreadyforgottenhowtomakefireandhowtowashclothes,thankstothecookerandthewashingmachine.Withoutthesebasiclivingskills,howcanamanlivealoneifallthemachinesbreakdown?Secondly,moderntechnologycomeswithpollution.Ithinknobadycanbeartheterriblrthingsthatpollutionbringstous.Weshoumakeitclearthatitisthemoderntechnologythatbringspollutiontoourdailylife.Technologyisdeveloping,andsodothepollutionsituation.Let’stakesomenew-developedcasforexample:whenanewcarisdeveloped,anoldgenerationwillretireandthatmakesupapartofsolidrubbish.Whenanewcarboaststhatitcangofaster,itwillsurelyusemorepetrol,thuscausealotofairpollutionwhichwilldonothinggoodtopeople.Thirdly,moderntechnologymakespeoplelazy.Canyouimagethatwhenthehouseworkisalldonebymachines,whatwillhousewivesdo?Accordingtoarecentreport,theyprefertostayinacoachandwatchTV,inthisway,moreandmore‘coachpotatoes’areproduced.TheexamplesIhavegivenbutafewofthemanythatillustratethecasesthatmoderntechnology’sbackdrawthatharmus.althoughmoderntechnologydidimproveourlife,Iprefertoliveinaplacewheretechnologyissinpler.Therewewillnomorebecontroledbythemachines,whereIcanbearealhuman.