MrsSmithheardhernewneighborwouldcomeandmovedintohisnewhouse，butshehadn'tseenhim．Onedaywhenshecameback，shesawamanwearabrownhatanddarkglassescarryingaladderonhisshou
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问题描述：
Mrs Smith heard her new neighbor would come and moved into his new house，but she hadn't seen him．One day when she came back，she saw a man wear a brown hat and dark glasses carrying a ladder on his shoulder．The man put the ladder against the window of the new house and went up to break in the window．Mrs Smith said to himself，"Thief，it is a thief．"She rang up the police immediate and soon two policemen appeared in the front of the house．When the man was told to hand in everything what he had stolen，he looked greatly surprising．It was then he understood the reason why the policemen came．He said in a smile on his face，"I can't find my key．It's my new house．"
孙明玮回答：
MrsSmithheardhernewneighborwouldcomeandmovedintohisnewhouse，butshehadn'tseenhim．Onedaywhenshecameback，shesawamanwearabrownhatanddarkglassescarryingaladderonhisshoulder．Themanputtheladderagainstthewindowofthenewhouseandwentuptobreakinthewindow．MrsSmithsaidtohimself，"Thief，itisathief．"Sherangupthepoliceimmediateandsoontwopolicemenappearedinthefrontofthehouse．Whenthemanwastoldtohandineverythingwhathehadstolen，helookedgreatlysurprising．Itwasthen∧heunderstoodthereasonwhythepolicemencame．Hesaidinasmileonhisface，"Ican'tfindmykey．It'smynewhouse．"
详
1．moved改为move；动词错误．句中move和come作并列谓语，位于情态动词would后，要用动词原形．
2．wear改为wearing；分词错误．句中wear作man的后置定语，要用非谓语动词；wear与man之间构成主谓关系，要用表示主动的现在分词．
3．in改为into；短语搭配错误．breakinto打碎，闯入．
4．himself改为herself；逻辑指代错误．句意指代的是MrsSmith，表示女性，要用herself来指代．
5．immediate改为immediately；副词错误．句中immediate修饰的是谓语动词rangup，要用副词形式．
6．去掉the；短语搭配错误．inthefrontof表示内部的前面；infrontof表示外部的前面．
7．what改为that；连词错误．句中hehadstolen作everything的后置短语，是一个定语从句；从句缺少宾语，且先行词everything是不定代词，要用that来引导．
8．surprising改为surprised；形容词错误．句中surprising作系动词look的表语，且表示主语he的感受，要用过去分词构成的形容词．
9．加that；句型搭配错误．itwas…that…强调句型，对heunderstoodthereasonwhythepolicemencamethen中的时间状语then进行强调．
10．in改为with；介词错误．句意表达的是伴随状态，要用with短语作伴随状语．
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