一片英语作文改错
Tomplaycomputerverygood!Heplayiteveryday.Hetypeisveryfast.Andhecanknowsomeinformationveryfastbeforeotherpeople.Theimportantishecanfindagoodjobwithcomputer.Thatmeanshehasmoreluckthansomepeopletheycan’tplaycomputerwell.
Playcomputerverywellhassomedisadvantagetoo.Itcanaffecttoourcourse.Ifweplaycomputerverylong,oureyescanverytired.AndontheInternethassomebadthings.Itcandamageourhealthy.Andsomestudentscanbeaddictedtoplaycomputergames.
就是这篇,请在错误的答案的后面打上括号把正确的写在括号里.
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