帮我改改我的英语作文吧(高中)
谁能帮我修改我的作文,老师说我错了好多,可是我要是能找的出来就不会错了,
它的题目是“为什么越来越多的城市人愿意去乡村度过周末.而乡村人却越来越愿意来城市度过周末”100词左右
Nowadays,withthedevelopmentofsociety,anincreasingnumberofpeoplelivinginthecitytendtohaveaweekendinthecountryside.Theydrivecarstothecountrysidefromthecityforfishing、hikingduringtheirweekend.Theyclaimthatthefreshairisofgreatbenefittotheirhealth.Inadditiontheycanenjoythebeautifulviewofthecountryside.Theycanrelaxthemselvesaswell.
Onthecontrary,thepeoplelivinginthecountrysidearelikelytotakethebusestothecityforshoppingorwatchingmoviessothattheycanimprovetheirlife.
Inthecaseofme,Ithink,althoughthecitywouldbeabletoalotofconvinced,butitbeadmittedthat,cityhasmoreairwithpollutedandmorenoise,whencomparedwiththecountryside.Therefore,Iprefertogotothecountrysideduringmyweekend.