Onepossibleversion:Mydearfriends,Readingisveryimportant.Wecangetknowledgethroughreading.Itcannotonlyopenourminds,butalsomakeuscleverandhappier.Ourstudycanbeimprovedifwereadmoregoodbooks.Themoreweread,themorewewilllearn,andthebrighterourfuturewillbecome.However,somestudentsspendmuchtimeinlisteningtomusic,watchingTVorgoingonlinetoplaygames.Ittakesmuchoftheirsparetime。SoIwouldliketosuggestthateveryoneshouldreadmorebooks,especiallyreadclassicssothatwecanspreadourChinesetraditionalculturetotheworld.Let’sstartreadingnow.Andletitbecomeapartofourlife!
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