Now,manypeoplelikesmoking,butweknowthatsmokingisn'tgoodforourhealth.SohowtogiveupsmokingItisverydiffcult.
Ifyoureallywanttogiveupsmoking,youcaneatmorevegetable.
whenyouwanttosmoke,youcandootherthingslikedoingexerciseorstayalone.Ihopeyoucangiveupsmokingbyyourself,andbecomemorehealth.
=应该不是完全对吧